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BoneRevolt's avatar

Thanks,.good one. Voice need some improvement as is a bit to mechanical, overall WOW

Ronald Haas's avatar

Beautiful and sexy. Well done. Thank you for sharing

Dave's avatar

Orion, what a story. From the beginning, you don't really know how this will play out. But once the first training session started, you felt the tension rise. The heat not turning sexual but turning into something primal. After the first locker room session, you knew the young man was going to get sucked in. And questioning it to the point of wanting more. But the older man made him choose. Out loud. And most of all, desire it. And then, surrender his being. But only by choice. Not some dom/sub dynamic. But an equal partnership of wants and needs.

And I must say, the scene in the locker room with the plug was so hot. I have never read anything like that before and it did bring a reaction to ne as I read it. Twice.

Great story. 🔥 🥵

Matty's avatar

Sexy, sensual. Fantastic writing. Thank you 🙏🏼

Steven Rentschler's avatar

Wow! Beautiful story! ❤️🙌🏻💯‼️💥🔥😍

Paxton's avatar

Got me 🧱 up, Orion. Thank you.🔥

Orion Vale's avatar

My pleasure 😈