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Chris Quandt's avatar

Truthfully, one of smartest, well written, things I've read in a long time. Two incredibly smart, insightful, confident men, both have power, just different types. The locations are well thought out and brought to life, make since to the storyline. So far I think this would make a great movie. Reading the next chapters now.

Orion Vale's avatar

Wow! Thank you so much, Chris. I really appreciate those words! Please keep reading!

Larry's avatar

Amazing story!!! I hope you’re going to continue building the relationship between Matthias and Declan. Hopefully you’ll continue this story line building their relationship. I like that your writing is more about the tension between a person’s relationships. Don’t get me wrong the sex scenes are hot, but the rest keeps me reading and wanting more of their story.

Orion Vale's avatar

Thank you so much, Larry! Feedback like this is why there is a lot more to come for Matthias and Declan!

Prachit Shete's avatar

I am floored!!! I want to see more of Matthias and Declan, this can build into something seductive, hot! 🔥🔥